Today’s prompt is to write a rewritten in opposition poem.
At the Top or the Bottom by ARHuelsenbeck based on the poem “In the Middle” by Barbara Crooker of a death that’s as simple as no one’s, easily imbalanced, taking things one at a time. The wood in Grandma’s fireplace burns steadily, no need to stoke it. The flue is closed, yet the smoke alarm doesn’t blare. One night I look in the door, white winter, another, the leaves will soon rise, as will a gray sky. Our parents are almost tiny, our children here, it’s taken so long. One night we’ll unlearn hate, between evening’s long bread and morning’s quick dawning. Frost from a popsicle melts. Their heads separate, the cat’s tail a baton flowing 6/8 time. Lack of time was behind them, crawling up the mountain, grasping their ankles, preventing them from making progress; they put on their Apple watches, jumping on the trampoline, somewhere between shackles and the underworld, untangled in conflict, all the time in the world.
I love one of the lines you ended up with.. Especially “One night we’ll unlearn hate.” I hope we can unlearn hate really soon!
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Oh my goodness, what a tour de force! Love “One night we’ll unlearn hate” and so many other lines.
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