Author Archives: Andrea R Huelsenbeck

About Andrea R Huelsenbeck

Andrea R Huelsenbeck is a wife, a mother of five and a former elementary general music teacher. A freelance writer in the 1990s, her nonfiction articles and book reviews appeared in Raising Arizona Kids, Christian Library Journal, and other publications. She is currently working on a young adult mystical fantasy novel and a mystery.

Video of the Week #311: Keep Searching Till You Find your Voice

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HERB WILLIAMS “The Call of the Wild” / short documentary from Jeremy Adams on Vimeo.

#dyicad2021 Day 23

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Drawing a person (or part of a person) every day in June and July for the Index-Card-a-Day Challenge.

Day 23

Wordless Wednesday/ Flower of the Day: Red Bird of Paradise

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red bird of paradise

More FOTD.

#dyicad2021 Day 22

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Drawing a person (or part of a person) every day in June and July for the Index-Card-a-Day Challenge.

Day 22

5 Grammar Goofs that Grate on Me

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One of the major complaints about self-published books is that they often come through with spelling and grammar errors.

But even worse than that is finding multiple grammar errors in books from major publishing houses. It makes me cringe.

Here are some of the most annoying errors I see, not just in books, but also in magazines, on websites, in advertising, in blog posts, on social media, and in emails. Make these mistakes, and I will judge you harshly.

  • Starting a sentence with a modifying clause that doesn’t apply to the subject of the sentence. Having majored in music, allegro is a lively tempo. No, no, no! Allegro didn’t even go to college! What does that subordinate clause really describe? Having majored in music, I know allegro is a lively tempo.
  • Misusing similar words. Affect, effect; great, grate; there, their, they’re. They may sound alike, but they mean totally different things. For example, affect is a verb that means to influence; effect is a noun that means a result. The temperature can affect a paint’s drying time. An effect of the hot weather was that the painters were able to apply a second coat later that afternoon.
  • Misusing apostrophes. Use an apostrophe in contractions, such as wasn’t, don’t, or isn’t. Use an apostrophe to denote ownership, such as Sarah’s handbag, Dad’s car, Tom’s tree. There is one exception: it. It’s means it is. Belonging to it uses no apostrophe: the dog drank its water. Do not use an apostrophe for plurals: shoes, rings, and the Smiths, not shoe’s, ring’s, and the Smith’s. If you have plural acronyms, make the letters capital followed by a small s, like ABCs or RTEs.
  • Misusing exclamation points. One means excitement. Most paragraphs only need one, at the end of the most exciting sentence. We’re going on vacation. To Paris. Paris in the springtime! And don’t you ever, ever, ever use multiple exclamation points one after the other!!!
  • Using wienie words. I have to confess, I use wienie words in my rough drafts when I’m trying to get ideas down fast before I forget them. Then I have to go back and change them. Do you know what wienie words are? Weak words that don’t add meaning or impact to your sentences. Like “very.” Very is a very, very weak word. Other wienie words: really, that, began to, started to. They have the effect of making your writing seem unnecessarily wordy. In most cases, you can eliminate them completely. Better yet, rewrite the whole sentence with strong words that convey exactly what you want your readers to experience. Instead of “he began to climb the very steep path,” try “he leaned forward, trying not to stumble while navigating the steep path.”

#dyicad2021 Day 21

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Drawing a person (or part of a person) every day in June and July for the Index-Card-a-Day Challenge.

Day 21

Monday Morning Wisdom #315

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Monday Morning Wisdom #315

When you see something that is not right, you must say something. You must do something. Democracy is not a state. It is an act, and each generation must do its part to help build what we called the Beloved Community, a nation and world society at peace with itself.

~ John Lewis

#dyicad2021 Day 20

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Drawing a person (or part of a person) every day in June and July for the Index-Card-a-Day Challenge.

Day 20

From the Creator’s Heart #312a

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From the Creator’s Heart #312

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Psalm 127:3-5a
Happy Father’s Day.