Author Archives: Andrea R Huelsenbeck

About Andrea R Huelsenbeck

Andrea R Huelsenbeck is a wife, a mother, a grandmother, and a former elementary general music teacher. A freelance writer in the 1990s, her nonfiction articles and book reviews appeared in Raising Arizona Kids, Christian Library Journal, and other publications. She is currently working on a middle grades novel and a poetry collection.

Sharing My World

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I’m taking this week’s challenge from pensitivity101.

1.  Have you ever lied about your age?
For a long time, when people really didn’t need to know my age, I said I was 29. But when I realized I’d already passed the 29th anniversary of my 29th birthday, I knew I couldn’t get away with it anymore. So now I’m just vague. I’m 70-ish.
2.  Is there any time in your life you would like to relive?
I think the happiest time of my life was when my five children were little. I wouldn’t mind going back to that time. I was a stay-at-home mom. We were financially challenged, but I loved being at home with my kids. And sometimes I wish I could go back to my college days.
3.  Do you own any antiques?
A true antique is at least 100 years old and in its original condition. I don’t think I have anything that old, but I do have a few old pieces belonging to my parents and Greg’s family that are circa WWII. And I have a Mother’s Cross that was awarded to my grandmother. (She gave birth to eight children, but she didn’t want Hitler’s medal. When she got home from the ceremony, she went out the backdoor of their farmhouse and flung it as far as she could. It landed in the beehive. My youngest uncle fished it out and kept it. And decades later, he gave it to me. I keep it as a remembrance of my grandmother’s disdain for the Führer.)

4.  Would you like to know some of the history of places you’ve visited?

Of course. I don’t get out much anymore, but whenever I’ve traveled I’ve been interested in the history of the places. Greg and I went to Williamsburg, Virginia for our honeymoon. At the time, I was very interested in the colonial period.

Monday Morning Wisdom #463

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Monday Morning Wisdom #463

“The greatest among us truly believe they are a work in progress forever, and they are entitled to nothing, and better than no one.” ~ Matt Higgins

From the Creator’s Heart #454

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And when he was demanded of the Pharisees, when the kingdom of God should come, he answered them and said, The kingdom of God cometh not with observation: Neither shall they say, Lo here! or, lo there! for, behold, the kingdom of God is within you (Luke 17:20-21 KJV).

Writing Style, Tone, and Voice

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elements of fiction

When I read about writing style, I also find tone and voice included in the discussion as elements of style, but to me they are three separate entities.

Style

I often read that writers should develop their own unique signature styles, but I think writers select different styles for different projects, and sometimes even for different parts of the same piece. To me, style is made up of the writing techniques the author employs, for example, the vocabulary he chooses, the length of his sentences and paragraphs, whether he writes in a didactic fashion or a more conversational mode. I think each author makes style choices consistent with what the project requires.

If she’s writing a scientific piece, she’s probably going to use scientific terminology, and possibly include definitions depending on who her intended audience is. Her paragraphs might be longer, structured with a topic sentence and several supporting sentences. An occasional short paragraph might be inserted to make an important point stick out.

For a humorous sketch, her vocabulary and sentence structure would likely be less formal and more conversational.

Or for a how-to, the writing should be clear and concise, laying out steps to follow to achieve a desired result.

In poetry, she might utilize literary devices and wordplay in her style.

Tone

Tone is the mood that the writing evokes. For example, in mystery or suspense, the tension keeps building. Romance may be erotic. Humor should be funny, satire wry. Okay, I can see how style impacts tone. But is tone a part of style, or an effect of it?

Voice

I believe voice is unique to the writer, but I also think a writer’s voice changes with the project, unless the writer specializes in one genre. I think I have a distinctive personal voice in my blog posts, but in my fiction, I’m more concerned about the character’s voice than my own—and each character should have a distinct voice.

Voice also depends on how words are put together and how sentences and paragraphs are structured, but voice also reveals something about the writer—or the character. For example, regional expressions may be part of the word choices, or the views expressed may be strongly influenced by one’s religious heritage. I could say that voice goes deeper into personality than style does. Okay, I can see how voice can influence style, but is voice an element of style, or an entity that stands adjacent to it?

Style, tone, and voice are like a trinity that collaborates on literary creations.

Creative Juice #395

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Creative Juice #395

All sorts of topics this week, and several good articles for writers.

Video of the Week: Ada Limón reads “Joint Custody”

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This brought tears to my eyes.

Wordless Wednesday/ Flower of the Day: Brittlebush

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More FOTD.

Flower of the Day: African Daisies

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More FOTD.

Monday Morning Wisdom #462

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Monday Morning Wisdom #462

If there are troubles in your mind, you should think first of the troubles of others; it is the essence of liberation. That is, freedom begins the moment we forget ourselves. ~ Dave Eggers, in The Eyes & the Impossible

From the Creator’s Heart #453

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